The typewriter is a form of comfort for Barton. He is struggling with it just now it is why he fumbles badly with the case and the latch. He is worried about opening it. He isn't sure about whether he likes it or not at the moment due to the troubles he is experiencing. Loud clicks and and heavy fumbles show the slow release and desperation of the man and not much comfort in it until the lid comes off. A deep breath as he looks at it shows his one moment of relief in comforts form outside of the hotel but nothing about his new environment sounds that promising.
I blended the caress sound with that of a coarse one like the typewriter is giving him negative feedback. I did this to show the two side of Barton's thoughts on writing. You can tell he longs to write but the machine will not provide him with his relief yet as he doesn't have the material to write yet.I made the press of the space bar some what lacking as well to show that his writing ability is weak and the buttons are lifeless and have no energy.
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